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样例:基于动态刚度阵法的船舶结构振动特性分析
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船舶结构振动特性分析是船舶振动研究的重要组成部分,船舶结构振动预报是船舶设计与制造过程中一项十分重要的研究课题。过大的振动响应常会导致船员与乘客身体不适,引起身体疲劳甚至损害健康,影响其正常生活和工作;此外,装有设备的基座在发生振动时,会把振动传给设备,还会导致电子计算机、自动控制仪表等工作失常,寿命缩短,或损坏失灵,有时甚至引起结构破坏,从而影响航运的安全性。
错误译文
The analysis of vibration characteristic for ship structure is a very important part of ship structure vibration research. Prediction of the ship structural vibration is an especially important subject for ship design and manufacture processes. It is recognized that excessive vibration response levels can be a health problem to the passengers and crew, and can decrease the efficiency of the work force. Furthermore, the vibration of foundation with equipments may destroy computers and automatic instrument, and it will be a safety factor in the ship operations.
修改后译文
The analysis of vibration characteristic of ship structure is a very important part of research on ship vibration. Prediction of the ship structural vibration is an especially important subject for ship design and manufacturing processes. It is recognized that excessive vibration response levels can cause health problem to the passengers and crew, and can bring body fatigue or even health damage, influencing people’s normal life and work. Furthermore, the vibration of foundation with equipments may resulted in abnormal situation, life reduction or damage or fault of computers and automatic control instrument, and thus threatens the safe operation of ship.
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错误译文
The analysis of vibration characteristic for ship structure is a very important part of ship structure vibration research. Prediction of the ship structural vibration is an especially important subject for ship design and manufacture processes. It is recognized that excessive vibration response levels can be a health problem to the passengers and crew, and can decrease the efficiency of the work force. Furthermore, the vibration of foundation with equipments may destroy computers and automatic instrument, and it will be a safety factor in the ship operations.
修改后译文
The analysis of vibration characteristic of ship structure is a very important part of research on ship vibration. Prediction of the ship structural vibration is an especially important subject for ship design and manufacturing processes. It is recognized that excessive vibration response levels can cause health problem to the passengers and crew, and can bring body fatigue or even health damage, influencing people’s normal life and work. Furthermore, the vibration of foundation with equipments may resulted in abnormal situation, life reduction or damage or fault of computers and automatic control instrument, and thus threatens the safe operation of ship.
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